This is the first part of my poem that i have written so far -
A long time ago, when i was a lad,
I had a small friend, just like everyone had.
It all began on a dull rainy day,
When it was far to wet to go out and play.
I sat on my own, at the dining room table,
And drew as good as i could, the best i was able.
Alone with some paper, a pencil and pen,
I drew a small character who smiled, and then,
He came to life to my shock and surprise,
I couldn't believe what was before my eyes.
For there stood my drawing with as much life as me,
A fun little friend, for my company.
We waved at each other and then we both knew,
We could have lots of fun together, just us two.
let me know what you think so far!
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3 comments:
hey simeon its karen, really like the poem, i think its a really good idea to use a poeem, would you have a narrator, or use text?? its great for your audience of familys and its a clever way of introducing the character.
Heya, looks really good so far! And i agree with Karen-the poem's a great way of introducing the character as the simple rhyme scheme will really help younger audience members engage with the plot.
Katie xXx
looks good so far
just think is should be a little looser or madder
look at the work of Edward Lear and Hilare Beloc for some more off the wall descriptions of situations and characters.
keep up the good work
oli
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